In tech i start with sewing me and all my friends are in the same group today me ann tech i start with sewing me and all my friends are in the same group today me and my buddy. Did our back and front covers for our pillows or cushions I'm doing yellow dots and green dots. oh our sewing teacher is Mrs Johnson.
electronics. our electronics teacher is Mr Osborn I'm making a game it has a wire if you touch is a blue light will go on. i had a great day today at tech it was amazing.
That sounds like a lot of fun! I like how you said in detail about what you do. I think you could change a few of the words in your sentences to make it sound better. Maybe next time you could change where the full stops are to make it run together smoothly.
ReplyDeleteHi Rylee it's Lila.This is nice work I really like how you put a lot of detail into this.Next time you could add more capital letters and put more full stops in.
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